Peer Feedback
[edit]Hello! Thank you for the information you wrote and revised about Gumi. I think it is a page that has reached its purpose enough because it seems to be helpful to people who are traveling in Gumi and have a lot of good information.But I think adding some images to the article would better attract visitors' interest.Other than that, everything was good. Lzk15038863666 (talk) 04:32, 27 October 2025 (UTC)
Request for feedback_'Gumi'
[edit]Hello everyone,
I have recently completed updates and improvements to the Gumi article on Wikivoyage.
I would greatly appreciate it if experienced editors could take a moment to review the article and provide feedback or suggestions for further improvement.
Thank you very much for your time and support. Hong Da Hyeon (talk) 06:03, 24 October 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you for expanding the article. I have only had a quick look, but did notice some areas for possible improvement:
- See has a list of Other attractions. It would be better to have some details, preferable full listings. Are there primary links for any of the See listings?
- Geumosan Market should be moved to buy unless you expect most visitors will just come to look, not buy.
- Is the Lotte Department Store a department store or a shopping mall?
- In sleep, add links to the hotel's own website.
- AlasdairW (talk) 13:01, 24 October 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you for your response. I have made all the revisions, and I would appreciate it if you could review them. Hong Da Hyeon (talk) 00:28, 31 October 2025 (UTC)
Request for final review of my article "Gumi"
[edit]Hello, I’ve edited the Gumi article for my Wikivoyage assignment. Could someone please review my edits and provide feedback? Thank you! Hong Da Hyeon (talk) 01:01, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
- Hi. I made some edits. I've gotten to the "Get in" section, and I would suggest for you to remove the listing templates for the airports, all of which are out of town. Instead, you should, for example, link Daegu Airport to Daegu#By plane like this: [[Daegu#By plane|Daegu Airport]]. I'm also having a problem with the map. It's not zoomed in enough, but when I try to recenter it further to the north, that is not working for me, for some reason I don't understand. Ikan Kekek (talk) 01:52, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
- +Ikan Kekek Thank you very much for your detailed feedback!
- I’ve updated the “Get in” section by removing the airport listings and adding links instead. I also fixed the map issue by increasing the zoom level and recentering it slightly north.
- Could you please take another look and let me know if further changes are needed? Hong Da Hyeon (talk) 05:46, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
- Those changes look good, though the names of airports could be bolded. I'm not sure when I'll have the chance to look further in the article, but I'll let you know. Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:02, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
- @Ikan Kekek: Thank you for your previous feedback. I’ve made the updates as discussed. Could you please give the article a final review when you have time? Thank you very much! Hong Da Hyeon (talk) 05:02, 11 November 2025 (UTC)
- There really isn't any such thing as a "final" anything on a wiki. I'll try to look at the whole article later, but I notice you included Gumi-si in an address in a new listing. Isn't that default address information that tells the reader the address is in Gumi? Ikan Kekek (talk) 05:04, 11 November 2025 (UTC)
- Ikan Kekek Thank you for pointing that out. I’ve made the requested changes. I’d appreciate it if you could review them at your convenience. Hong Da Hyeon (talk) 05:10, 21 November 2025 (UTC)
- There really isn't any such thing as a "final" anything on a wiki. I'll try to look at the whole article later, but I notice you included Gumi-si in an address in a new listing. Isn't that default address information that tells the reader the address is in Gumi? Ikan Kekek (talk) 05:04, 11 November 2025 (UTC)
- @Ikan Kekek: Thank you for your previous feedback. I’ve made the updates as discussed. Could you please give the article a final review when you have time? Thank you very much! Hong Da Hyeon (talk) 05:02, 11 November 2025 (UTC)
- Those changes look good, though the names of airports could be bolded. I'm not sure when I'll have the chance to look further in the article, but I'll let you know. Ikan Kekek (talk) 07:02, 2 November 2025 (UTC)
@Hong Da Hyeon : Why is "Gumi-si, Gyeongsangbuk-do" still in many of the listings that you added in November? You said that you made the requested changes, but you didn't make them. Are you expecting someone else to correct your mistakes? Ground Zero (talk) 03:42, 4 December 2025 (UTC)
- @Ground Zero : After submitting the revised version for feedback, it seems I repeated the same mistake while adding the additional locations. My apologies. I have updated the document again to include the newly added locations as well. Please review it when you have a moment. Thank you. Hong Da Hyeon (talk) 05:03, 4 December 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you for making the changes. Ground Zero (talk) 19:54, 4 December 2025 (UTC)